Photo courtesy of Central Penn College: "The Boyer House"
The thing is
When one ventures from the abode;
That comfortable home in our cranium
That comfortable home in our cranium
What we previously held back,
We tend to, (and tend to see)
The things
that weren’t there before
But always were:
The mossy outcrop where a plastic bag
clings to a twig, and waves as the star spangled banner
of disregard
The fenced line between two pastures
The opposition of juxtaposed ownership
And different aspirations
Hatfields,
McCoys,
…Coy ones in hats
Feuds and friendships
The cables between telephone poles
That traverse the horizon, carrying text
Homes with gazebos, never used
Back porch clutter
Unkept lawns, a garden, a gnome
The thing is
These things make us, tell a story
They show we are here, and we have placed
Something, anything on ground or reached for sky
That we knew we’d never reach
A welcome mat to our homes, hearts, and our minds
The lineage we have
Ingredients for the recipe of me
It’s a cosmic soup, but the past ones
Have such an enigmatic effect, as a dim light
In the Gobi desert of our conscience
The lone spot in barren land
The Unavoidable;
Circus elephants in the room:
The tree line of family.
The thing is
This tree, can be
Elegant, elaborate, laced with royal branches
And pretty leaves
Or low, to the ground, just trying to be
In a world of devour and survive
Recessive, or Progressive
Painful, or Pleasurable
But that’s not the point
Or a tip to wait
The thing is
This beauty and tragedy lies in every entity
All the living and all the dead
There’s poetry, there’s decency
There’s a place to dig deep
and yet
We must respect the lining
The black lining
The white lining
The shade of grey
The thing is
We begin to realize
Eyes go wide, open and unable to slumber
Insomnia lends to obsessive voyeurism
Because beauty and ugliness still wage a war
The thing is
There’s things we don’t know
That we’ll never understand, but strive to
But at the very least
We’re doing to try.
Writing to reach “We.”Me?
That (I think)
Is The Thing.
yeah i think it is the thing as well...this is an excellent write...seeing that which is there but we barely notice it and bringing it out in our writing...
ReplyDelete"The mossy outcrop where a plastic bag
ReplyDeleteclings to a twig, and waves as the star spangled banner/of disregard..." an intricate and compelling weave of the strands we try to separate and remake with such perpetual Penelope-like perseverance...yes, the way to understanding is to meet the elephant in the room and see how he got in...an excellent poem, I enjoyed the experience of it very much.
Your poem is a tour de force of the principle of opposition: fences, tree lines,coy ones in hats. Not only the beauty and tragedy, but beauty and ugliness possess each of us as individuals, as in I am an "us". Perpetual balancing act.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you express yourself. I would love to hear this one read aloud. Great job.
ReplyDeletewhat a wonderful transverse from life to words...many wonderful images woven into the contemplative nature to keep it tangible, breathing...excellent write~
ReplyDeleteIf you can still your mind and observe is there no longer any seperation between you and the elephant in the room?
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback as always, friends. Some excellent commentary; I knew that this would strike chords with those addicted to words. You've all grasped the essence of my intention: That yes, opposition and division exist, and the normally visible is akin to invisibility, but the individual has the power to coalesce these things with writing, and with relating to past into present. Hence, we shine light on the things that are ignored, and put the elephant where it belongs, in the untangled yet beautifully intricate jungle of our text
ReplyDeleteexcellent write bryan...Because beauty and ugliness still wage a war...so true and the thing is we always try to catch with our words and make their life shine through and paint it with our moods without destroying the feeling..i enjoyed this tremendously
ReplyDeleteWOW -- the star-spangled banner of disregard. That is so cool.
ReplyDeleteHonored to meet your talent in words.
I could so relate to the first few verses, and that made me to continue the read :) It is beautiful, and like Jannie says, an honor to meet your talent in words :)
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