tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3479851106228909776.post3701723648532832781..comments2011-10-18T14:00:09.444-07:00Comments on Quills and Quasars: Purgatorial PissingsBKPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12187075525353666744noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3479851106228909776.post-6967982999670665252011-07-27T17:35:22.427-07:002011-07-27T17:35:22.427-07:00Excellent piece. So many layers to this one, as if...Excellent piece. So many layers to this one, as if woven within the strings transversing dark matter. Fifth stanza, however, conjured a vision of an old classic rock album of a man holding a lantern atop a rock cliff, below him clouds, shining a light into the abyss. (if only I could remember the album!) ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3479851106228909776.post-41732214852442178532011-07-27T15:34:44.466-07:002011-07-27T15:34:44.466-07:00A great spaced out trip.
This piece felt like a t...A great spaced out trip.<br /><br />This piece felt like a true journey.<br /><br />The opening stanza sucked me and the words held me like an event horizon.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3479851106228909776.post-5931473952327555622011-07-26T19:45:49.579-07:002011-07-26T19:45:49.579-07:00Oh my inner nerd had to be brought out to grasp so...Oh my inner nerd had to be brought out to grasp some of these words. But I got them. Amazingly played.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3479851106228909776.post-82181778410310631922011-07-26T18:32:19.490-07:002011-07-26T18:32:19.490-07:00Blown away, as always , with what you do with word...Blown away, as always , with what you do with words. The title is a lead in to a true purgative journey, where the destination may be amorphously the same as the starting point, but the traveler himself has altered, left the binary, subsumed himself in 'radial transgressions..' lost his soul and his fare, and yet arrives. The language throughout is amazing, especially liking the last stanza.<br /><br />Good to see you with us at dVerse, Pounds.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3479851106228909776.post-65183785437655470292011-07-26T17:33:52.875-07:002011-07-26T17:33:52.875-07:00wow - all of those paradoxes to ultimately end up ...wow - all of those paradoxes to ultimately end up right where you started...yes, that sounds like life to me :)Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3479851106228909776.post-48973612495702860232011-07-26T17:29:30.772-07:002011-07-26T17:29:30.772-07:00have i told you that you make my brain hurt with w...have i told you that you make my brain hurt with what you do with big words...ha...and still get a great flow out of it...my mind though is spinning...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3479851106228909776.post-38089957753943289002011-07-26T17:03:34.058-07:002011-07-26T17:03:34.058-07:00A couple of thoughts, lost:
Sun Ra said: "sp...A couple of thoughts, lost:<br /><br />Sun Ra said: "space is the place."<br /><br />First there is a mountain....<br /><br />If you keep traveling in the same direction in outer space, will you eventually reach the place you started out?Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.com